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tj_dragonbladeTitle: ...It's a Kodak Moment...
Rated: G.
Word Count: 100
Characters: Kenren/Tenpou
Tenpou had passed out at his desk, slumped over the latest in his collection of historical texts. His cheek was squashed against the crease of the book, glasses skewed halfway off his face; one arm lay across the pages, fingers resting limply at the upper corner. He was snoring softly, intermittently, while a small puddle dampened the parchment beneath his half-open mouth.
He was, quite frankly, adorable.
And 'adorable', thought Kenren, smiling fondly as he paused just inside the threshold, was somehow the last word he would have ever expected to find himself using of a commanding officer...
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Written: 01/24 and 01/25/05
>_< Two days for a *drabble*--sometimes, my muses are simply pathetic. Or perhaps it's the fact that I can't sit them down for any length of time straight to hash it out...(shrugs)
I need to do some revisions to 'Awakening'. I've got somewhat of a better handle on Hakkai's voice by now; and when I skimmed through it a couple days ago, I found it sounding very noticeably like dub-Hakkai, right down to hearing the flat, stilted, out-of-step vocal delivery in my head. And good god, there are extraneous emphasis marks all over the place. And a blatant disregard for Hakkai's well-developed sense of modesty...though I may not change that. ^_^; I *like* having him shirtless, and...I can chalk it up to his highly-pre-occupied mental state, yes? ^_^;; No? ...Maybe? (sweatdrop) It does serve as a sort of visual metaphor for his vulnerability during the scene, after all...
And...damn, but Gojyo really needs a bit of tweaking, too. Though I'm less confident in my current Gojyo-voice skills than Hakkai...I'm more comfortable with Kenren, it seems. Probably because he's got that slightly-more-refined edge that somehow seems to come naturally when I sit down to write...
Whoops...rambling. ^_^;
So...yes. The fic's getting a little bit of a makeover. ^_^;
And then I really need to find the time to tweak it into ff.net's annoyingly quirky formatting and upload it to my long-empty account...
Rated: G.
Word Count: 100
Characters: Kenren/Tenpou
Tenpou had passed out at his desk, slumped over the latest in his collection of historical texts. His cheek was squashed against the crease of the book, glasses skewed halfway off his face; one arm lay across the pages, fingers resting limply at the upper corner. He was snoring softly, intermittently, while a small puddle dampened the parchment beneath his half-open mouth.
He was, quite frankly, adorable.
And 'adorable', thought Kenren, smiling fondly as he paused just inside the threshold, was somehow the last word he would have ever expected to find himself using of a commanding officer...
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Written: 01/24 and 01/25/05
>_< Two days for a *drabble*--sometimes, my muses are simply pathetic. Or perhaps it's the fact that I can't sit them down for any length of time straight to hash it out...(shrugs)
I need to do some revisions to 'Awakening'. I've got somewhat of a better handle on Hakkai's voice by now; and when I skimmed through it a couple days ago, I found it sounding very noticeably like dub-Hakkai, right down to hearing the flat, stilted, out-of-step vocal delivery in my head. And good god, there are extraneous emphasis marks all over the place. And a blatant disregard for Hakkai's well-developed sense of modesty...though I may not change that. ^_^; I *like* having him shirtless, and...I can chalk it up to his highly-pre-occupied mental state, yes? ^_^;; No? ...Maybe? (sweatdrop) It does serve as a sort of visual metaphor for his vulnerability during the scene, after all...
And...damn, but Gojyo really needs a bit of tweaking, too. Though I'm less confident in my current Gojyo-voice skills than Hakkai...I'm more comfortable with Kenren, it seems. Probably because he's got that slightly-more-refined edge that somehow seems to come naturally when I sit down to write...
Whoops...rambling. ^_^;
So...yes. The fic's getting a little bit of a makeover. ^_^;
And then I really need to find the time to tweak it into ff.net's annoyingly quirky formatting and upload it to my long-empty account...
