I think we *all* feel that way about our fics; I know mine always seem better in the head. ^___^
I enjoyed this immensely. Read easy, flowed well, kept you interested, and yeah, Kenren would *definitely* have problems with the lack of transparency in Kanzeon's attire. Plus... eggplant? *shakes head* one wonders if Hakkai thinks Buddhist vow sashes are bought at the Gap or something. *lol* "Here, Gojyo, try on this jacket. Let's see if they have your size in 'Sonoma.' 'Sahara Winds' is a little too light against your complexion..."
But you know... we *really* need to come up with the Purple Dragon cocktail. I think you should have a competition. I vote for Wan Fu and creme de cassis; like a kir royale, but with "Chinese" white wine. That way it's regal, Chinese, *and* girl drinkish, all at the same time!
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Date: 2009-01-30 05:00 am (UTC)I enjoyed this immensely. Read easy, flowed well, kept you interested, and yeah, Kenren would *definitely* have problems with the lack of transparency in Kanzeon's attire. Plus... eggplant? *shakes head* one wonders if Hakkai thinks Buddhist vow sashes are bought at the Gap or something. *lol* "Here, Gojyo, try on this jacket. Let's see if they have your size in 'Sonoma.' 'Sahara Winds' is a little too light against your complexion..."
But you know... we *really* need to come up with the Purple Dragon cocktail. I think you should have a competition. I vote for Wan Fu and creme de cassis; like a kir royale, but with "Chinese" white wine. That way it's regal, Chinese, *and* girl drinkish, all at the same time!