ext_212312 ([identity profile] entitys.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tj_dragonblade 2011-05-05 12:33 am (UTC)

i see that you've lengthened the count. *_* poor creature really was up for awhile with the 'how i love thee, let me kill you in so many ways' thoughts. but i think what i really like about this piece, besides Sai realizing his feelings, is that in just a few sentences, even though it isn't from his point of view, you've still managed to convey how much Yamato loves Sai. tis super lovely to read.

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