I've read a lot of Saiyiki fanfiction and I'm quite sure that's the first time I've encountered this pairing. Since I love both characters individually (yes, they are both severely under-used in fanfiction - and canon, for that matter), yay for that. The plot (even the Plot-what-plot part of it) was equally original and amusing. In short - loved it and I'm glad you didn't give up on this before posting it!
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