I think you did a really good job with this. I like the relationship you've portrayed between Hakkai/Hakuryuu. It was feel good sweet. The pic also rocks very hard.

In case you're in the mood for Hakkai/Hakuryuu of a more intimate nature, I do have that pairing occuring in my fic BBE. Not sure if you've read it but, if you go to my LJ there's a link to it on the right hand side of the page. I can provide the specific title names for the Hakkai/Hakuryuu if you wish.