Drabbling...At the Moment, It Keeps Me Sane...

Title: ...It's a Kodak Moment...
Rated: G.
Word Count: 100
Characters: Kenren/Tenpou

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Written: 01/24 and 01/25/05

>_< Two days for a *drabble*--sometimes, my muses are simply pathetic. Or perhaps it's the fact that I can't sit them down for any length of time straight to hash it out...(shrugs)

I need to do some revisions to 'Awakening'. I've got somewhat of a better handle on Hakkai's voice by now; and when I skimmed through it a couple days ago, I found it sounding very noticeably like dub-Hakkai, right down to hearing the flat, stilted, out-of-step vocal delivery in my head. And good god, there are extraneous emphasis marks all over the place. And a blatant disregard for Hakkai's well-developed sense of modesty...though I may not change that. ^_^; I *like* having him shirtless, and...I can chalk it up to his highly-pre-occupied mental state, yes? ^_^;; No? ...Maybe? (sweatdrop) It does serve as a sort of visual metaphor for his vulnerability during the scene, after all...

And...damn, but Gojyo really needs a bit of tweaking, too. Though I'm less confident in my current Gojyo-voice skills than Hakkai...I'm more comfortable with Kenren, it seems. Probably because he's got that slightly-more-refined edge that somehow seems to come naturally when I sit down to write...

Whoops...rambling. ^_^;

So...yes. The fic's getting a little bit of a makeover. ^_^;

And then I really need to find the time to tweak it into ff.net's annoyingly quirky formatting and upload it to my long-empty account...